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Alison Acheson's avatar

I'm enjoying...!

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Felicia Randolph's avatar

Beautifully written! More…send us more!

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

Thanks so much! Glad you’re enjoying it. Please share with others.

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April's avatar

Appreciate the way your novel unfolds; the rich descriptions and sense of mystery. I see a BBC "Foyle's War" style production in the wings. I'm hooked!

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

From your lips to God’s ears! I’m glad you’re enjoying it. Thanks so much for reading/listening.

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Styndall's avatar

This is a treat! I love having a chapter a day to look forward to - you had me from the beginning paragraph! I’m also enjoying your narration. You have a beautiful voice and it adds another aspect to the experience.

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

Thank you! I’m glad to hear you’re enjoying the narration too.

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Glynis Hill-Chandler's avatar

Awesome! Ready to read more.

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reading/listening. I really appreciate it.

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Chiya's avatar

Loved it! Beautiful! Narration A++

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

Thanks so much. Don’t be shy about sharing it with your friends.

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Helen C. Page's avatar

I loved this from the opening word. Beautifully written and the narration is perfect for this story, it definitely adds to the atmosphere. I can't wait for tomorrow's installment. I was afraid he was going to say we had to wait a week. I couldn't stand the suspense.

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

Thanks so much. I hope you won’t feel inundated by the short daily installments. But I agree. A week seems too long between chapters.

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Virginia Hurrfeld's avatar

Glad this is chapter one. Discomfort hit when I concluded I read a short story .

A full chapter called me to keep reading. Hope it comes via this device and website.

Regards

V

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

Yes, all 35 chapters will be delivered to your inbox each day, just as this first one was. Thanks for reading/listening. I really appreciate it.

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Mikels Skele's avatar

Hooked me right in. I hope this starts a trend to serialized novels.

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

Thanks very much! I hope so, too.

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