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Sep 30, 2021Liked by Andrew Jazprose Hill

Beautifully written! More…send us more!

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Sep 30, 2021Liked by Andrew Jazprose Hill

Appreciate the way your novel unfolds; the rich descriptions and sense of mystery. I see a BBC "Foyle's War" style production in the wings. I'm hooked!

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Sep 29, 2021Liked by Andrew Jazprose Hill

This is a treat! I love having a chapter a day to look forward to - you had me from the beginning paragraph! I’m also enjoying your narration. You have a beautiful voice and it adds another aspect to the experience.

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Sep 28, 2021Liked by Andrew Jazprose Hill

Awesome! Ready to read more.

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Sep 28, 2021Liked by Andrew Jazprose Hill

Loved it! Beautiful! Narration A++

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Sep 28, 2021Liked by Andrew Jazprose Hill

I loved this from the opening word. Beautifully written and the narration is perfect for this story, it definitely adds to the atmosphere. I can't wait for tomorrow's installment. I was afraid he was going to say we had to wait a week. I couldn't stand the suspense.

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Sep 27, 2021Liked by Andrew Jazprose Hill

Glad this is chapter one. Discomfort hit when I concluded I read a short story .

A full chapter called me to keep reading. Hope it comes via this device and website.

Regards

V

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Hooked me right in. I hope this starts a trend to serialized novels.

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