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Styndall's avatar

I’m in! I have to see how this plays out. I’ve been looking forward to more fiction from you, and this is a great first installment!

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

So glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading and weighing in. I hope you'll find the remaining two episodes equally interesting.

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Keith's avatar

You wonderfully describe a peaceful family home interrupted by race hatred disguised as community “improvement.” Current social structures, housing developments etc originated from this type of racial power dynamic. I, too, can’t wait to see how this unfolds. Bravo!

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

Working on this story has been educational on several fronts, Keith. Thank you for pointing out the ramifications of the dynamics described in this episode. I really appreciate your interest and support. And I always appreciate hearing your thoughts. Thanks again!

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Helen C. Page's avatar

Breathtaking. I can’t wait for the next episode.

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Andrew Jazprose Hill's avatar

Thanks so much. It’s really encouraging to know you’re enjoying it. And thanks also for taking the time to let me know!

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